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mouth stitches // 2003-03-14

every so often i think my job might actually be cool. here are my notes from a review i edited today:

i think i see two typos in here:

1. in the first sentence, i believe it should read, "it has colossal mutated beasts itching to fight each other".
2. and the second sentence in the second paragraph might read better with an "and" in there, like so:
   "Cities everywhere are now powerless to stop the rampaging savages, which include a King Kong rip-off named Congar and the Godzilla-inspired Togera, to name just two."

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the last of my mouth stitches fell out this morning. i thought about posting a picture of one of them, but then i thought better of it. that's even too nasty for me.

before // after